The Final Piece

After looking back on our film opening we discided that we should change our titles as they were too quick and small. We also alterered the names and the jobs roles. Finally, we added in a tense build up to exagerate the black charater. This will make it more gripping and help witht the sepense. By doing all of this it will make our film better and look more professional.
I hope you enjoy it.

Another rough cut

We gathered feedback and it all seemed very positive. I am very pleased with our film opening and I think the music that was added in gives it suspense and tension.

Our response to the showing of our film opening

Yesterday, Lauren and I were able to show our film opening to a group of people (39) who were 15 and above. The showing was very successful and gave us valuable response to improve. They also insured us that the film opening was good and had elements of creepiness. We got everyone to fill in a sheet with five questions. These were;

Do you think the sound is effective? Is there anything you would add?

Do you understand what is happening in the film opening?

Does it make you want to watch more of the film?

Is there any way we can improve it?

What would you rate the film out of 10?

These were the results. As you can see, we score very highly and the majority of our audience rated our film 10/10.

As you can see from our pie chart 56% rated 10/10,

28% rated us 9/10

15% rated us 8/10